Wednesday 28 May 2014

Allegory Of Freedom





The door opened and I saw it

Luminous on the glass pedestal

Feeling its warmth as I took it from the plate

My pernicious persona vanished

I became the messiah of God

Awestruck at this epochal moment

My shadow vanished in the universe



18 comments:

  1. An amazing moment and a leap of faith. Nice!

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    1. Faith leads us to a better understanding:)

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  2. I love the embracing of becoming the Messiah of God ~ Very meaningful write ~

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    1. We all are in our own way messiah of god..thanks

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  3. what a beautiful transformation eh? when we come face to face with god....smiles...

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    1. Yes Brian..transformation for the thoughts..deep inside we all are pure..
      Thanks:)

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  4. :) very well written. God works on us in his own mysterious ways.

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  5. Great use of the words in this epiphany!

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  6. Oh lovely.. you used the words well..

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  7. you used the words to create a fantastic moment... well done

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  8. So beautiful. I especially liked "Luminous on the glass pedestal". Nice write!

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  9. Poignant moment framed here...great use of the words.

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